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Hiver Siberien - WIP

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Well here is a test of the illustration I had in mind. I'm still not fully happy about it. .__. Maybe I'll completely change it for another pose ha ha.
The little kitty here is an Uncia. The flowers are camellias. The tittle means "Siberian Winter". Oxana is holding a Dragunov SDVK. And the stained glass windows like above form the symbols on the URSS flag yes.

I posted it on tumblr but the feedbacks I waited for didn't came. xD Maybe I should do a scraps account here on DA to get feedbacks? I'm really serious about them, not for compliments nor anything, I just really want to get better and improve this illustration which means a lot to me. And since I don't plan to line it right now anymore - to wait instead of rushing it for once. Thank you in advance. :)
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First of all: a beautful idea and already a gorgeous sketch, so that's a well done already xD

I have to agree with FredStesney that the angle of her back is a little strange, but I think that could be solved by turning her just a little more profile..if that makes sense XD
Good grace it's hard to look for things to improve on in here...Maybe indeed for a better balance in the picture move her and the cat to the right a bit (though you were already planning that I saw ;v;)
I'm not even sure if this comment still is of use seeing as you put this up such a while ago, but for my feeling there's something missing at the top, I'm not even sure what but it seems a little empty there?